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Dawn at the Alamo

Reuben M. Potter to McArdle, September 1, 1874

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Potter to McArdle, September 1874

you do not mention where you locate the death of the


former.

            The walls of the Chappel [sic] in your plan may well be


viewed as the mantle which covers the face of Agamemnon,


hiding an expression not to be portrayed, but only to be im-


gined from what surrounding visages exhibit. Have you


thought of putting any objects on the top of the church wall, or


elsewhere, to give a hint of the terrible unseen. The only


thing I can think of is a group of Mexican soldiers who


have just reached the parapet by escalade and are


looking down into the interior of the rooftop fabric as


into the crater of a volcano, each with face & attitude


that show him too much appalled to fire. I do not know


that the point of view admits of this. At the time of


the assault the front wall of the church was of the same


height as the sides, the apex or gable having since been


built. By leaving it out of the picture, the view I suggest


might be facilitated.

            Of the titles you mention for the painting I like best


"The dawn of the Alamo." Would it be improved by saying


“"The prophetic dawn of the Alamo."

            As for my unlucky inscription, it would have been


better had I written "I am baptized with the blood of


heroes”" yet it is only through the context that

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